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Take this heart
That beats in my chest
Cut it out deep
So it can have rest

Take this heart
And stitch it together
Its tired of the pain
Of the emotional weather

Its tired of the foolish lies
And the hollow smiles

Its tired of the soft cries
As my soul walks for miles

So please..
Take this heart..
As it slowly dies
And whisper softly
Those sweet goodbyes.
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ARoseInTheThorns Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
luv it!
"So please..
Take this heart..
As it slowly dies
And whisper softly
Those sweet goodbyes."
My favorite part!!!!!
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theforgotten3337 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012
Thank you :)
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oconpo0 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012
My favourite line is the
'It's tiered of the pain
Of the emotional weather'

Nice play on words
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theforgotten3337 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012
Thank You
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