literature

When you're gone...

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Do you not hear it?
The hurt behind my laugh...
You come around every once in awhile...
But we stay on this continuous path..

You call me just when..
My love starts to fall..
And then I am back,
At the start of it all

I am addicted to this feeling
That plays in my head..
The one time you call me..
As I lay in my bed..

You tell me that you love me
That this is not a dream..
We sleep with the phone on.
To be close to eachother...

But now your gone again..
You disappeared..
And I am here to pick up
The pieces of my heart..

I smile in this empty house
And wait for you to come back
Because with all this madness
Loyality...
I do not lack..

So please come back..
Again some day..
So then I can smile again..
This I pray..
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ArtemAmoris's avatar
Good job! You've done well expressing yourself and your emotional state, and the wording you've chosen is pretty good. I only have one problem, however, it should be "When *you're* gone".

Other than that, nice work.